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传承诗词之路

年级:高中3年级 测评人:李羽心 字数:1007字 [正在测评…] 时间:2017月11月04日 12:59

沉醉于清风明月,山光水色,碧海晴空之中,清雅的墨香,娟透的字迹,远离了红尘的喧嚣,世间的纷扰,只品味你的高雅、情韵、风姿、和谐,悠悠回旋心间……

“胸藏文墨虚怀谷,腹有诗书气自华”。对诗词如痴如醉的我与文人墨客同行的途中,也产生了学写诗词的念头。就此,我踏上了传承诗词的漫漫长路。第一次学写诗词的我,就像只无头苍蝇到处乱撞。在因缘际会下,我加入了一个网络文学群,由此,我的诗词之路发生了重要转折。

传承之路也并非是一帆风顺。考核后进入总群,我请他们评论我自己写的诗词。但令我措手不及的是我写的诗词漏洞百出,惨不忍睹,好友们的评论让我知道原来写诗词也有许多规矩,平仄、韵脚、字数、情感、禁忌……令我第一次感到自己文墨的空虚。我有些失望与沮丧,默默望着天,思绪茫然。难道就这样放弃吗?不!我为什么要放弃?我就如此不堪一击败吗?抬头坚定地望着流云,不管多么艰苦,我也要走完传承诗词之路!毅然转身,奋笔挥洒,为心中执着的追求,不破楼兰终不还!一次次努力,一次次失败又一次次爬起。自己坚持不懈地努力,查阅相关诗词,好友们一遍遍不厌其烦地讲授给我诗词知识,一遍遍不辞辛苦地给我出题目、评改,终于取得了不错的进步。与好友们共同切磋、交流、进步,传承诗词的道路上,有他们相助,充实、愉悦、充满动力。

传承诗词的路上,品“白发三千丈,缘愁似个长”,赏“缺月挂疏桐,漏断人初静”,忆“松间明月,石上泉流”。点点杨花,袅袅孤烟,犹记阑珊灯火,斜月轻转。时而在朗月下与李白独酌,月淡、风凄、素衣寒,超然独处;时而雨中独行,不禁产生“雨横惊寒雀,风狂卷乱红。欲逐霖雨去,却感路朦胧”的情感;时而迎着晨曦,发出“幽径孤行晓露侵,冷风利扫啸成音。金乌冉冉凭栏望,赤海绵绵沐晔吟。玉宇斑斓怜碧血,光华熠耀照丹心。浮生只叹知音少,却向何人论古今”的慨叹。流光促,转瞬度,浮生若梦,为欢几何?世人嗟叹知音难觅,其实难觅的不是知音,而是一颗平静淡然且自得于世事的心。道路,固然是崎岖的,但日出、日落是定数,是胜、是败又如何?失败迷惘时,不要想得太多,只要循心而往,便是方向,只有心才能决定自己的去处与方向。正所谓天高任鸟飞,海阔凭鱼跃。大好江山云缥渺,身在囹圄心自高。燕雀岂识鸿鹄志,翻袖决胜千里遥。传承诗词之路是多么美妙又充满悲欢离合。

传承诗词之路上,风花雪月,浅吟低唱,洗去浮华,滋润心田,走上传承诗词之路,我无悔,漫漫传承征途,在等着我去征服。

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